Saturday, July 30, 2011

Read a Comic Book, Seriously, It Might Change How You Write


Have you ever heard anyone say, “I hate novels! I’d never read one.” Probably not because the term “novel” is an umbrella term, clumping together Agatha Christie mysteries with Ender’s Game science fiction with Jodi Picoult “chick lit.” But I’ve bet you’ve heard this phrase before, “I hate comic books! I’d never read one.”
 Marvel superhero comic books, Vertigo Fable tales based on myth and fairy tale, and Japanese manga romance are all comic books. Doesn’t this leave the smart reader wondering, isn’t the term “comic book” like “novel” just as all encompassing? We don’t condemn the medium of novels because we don’t like “chick lit,” one of the many genres a novel can take. But, we see it all the time, comic books are often condemned in just this way, and by condemning them, we’re denying ourselves the pleasures of both reading and writing in this unique form.
Perhaps because of the stigma against comic books, I’d lived eighteen years without ever reading one. I grew up surrounded by books. My dad would read Nancy Drew novels to my sisters and I before we went to bed, I devoured The Lord of the Rings trilogy in a single week when I was in middle school, and I reluctantly read Thomas Hardy and Milton in my college literature classes. But not once did I read a comic book. By seventh grade, I was dead set on following my dream of becoming a novelist. I had been writing since first grade when my mom bought me a journal with kittens on the front, yet by college I felt something was missing. I loved to write, to create ideas and bring them to life, creating something out of nothing. But I wasn’t reading very much anymore. And reading for school doesn’t count, because, honestly, I never finished Tess of the d’Urbervilles, or The Jungle, or All Quite on the Western Front, or The Canterbury Tales
And then one summer I fell in love with the Iron Man movie, and the can of worms was opened. The new movies based on comic books metaphorically snatched the James Joyce novel from my reluctant fingers, and Shazam! replaced it with Origins, my first ever comic book. Comic books were a form of reading (and writing) I’d never experienced before. The visuals combined with words, an emphasis on characterization and plot, not on elevated language or fancy metaphor. Comic books contained the best elements of a novel, and, I’d argue, could represent the human condition as well as The Great Gatsby, all while visually involving the reader, pulling her along on a more compelling adventure. I decided to write a graphic novel for my senior thesis this coming year. I’ll take the traditional novel I’d been struggling to write for nearly three years, and write it as a graphic novel script. Just a month ago, I pulled up a blank Word document and began writing my novel as a graphic novel for the first time. I couldn’t believe how rapidly my thoughts propelled themselves onto the screen. I was writing more than I’d written in months, and I was enjoying it!  I’d found my new form, shook loose my musty old views of what writing should be, and took a step closer to finding myself as a writer.  I wish someone had told me earlier that it was ok to read comics, and perfectly acceptably awesome to write them

I’d like to challenge anyone who hasn’t read a comic book yet to do so. Try to push aside the prejudices you perhaps have against comic books. Remember, you’d never say “I hate novels!” Right? So don’t clump all comic books together. Explore the different genres within the graphic writing medium and you might (probably) find a new favorite way to read.

Wednesday, July 27, 2011

Women Doing Literary Things

I recently subscribed to the blog "Women Doing Literary Things" (which I found from She Writes, another great site you should check out). If you're looking to converse with other writerly women and learn about their triumphs and struggles, check out this blog.

Monday, July 25, 2011

Add This to Your Bookshelf

 Writing for Comics & Graphic Novels 
by Peter David



Writing for Comics is the first "how to write comics" book that I read as I began my adventure into the world of comic book writing. I recommend it for both those who are just starting out or for seasoned writers who are looking for an enjoyable book to read (Although, honestly, a very experienced writer will certainly get less out of it than a newbie).

Why should you add Writing for Comics & Graphic Novels to your bookshelf?
  • advice direct from an expert (Peter David's been in the biz for quite a while, and he's written some big-name comics. Hulk, for example)
  • easy to read format
  • writing exercises included
  • shows scripts and the resulting comic
  • explanation of basic writing techniques (characterization, plot, etc.)
  • introduction to comic book-specific writing techniques (scripting, villains, continuity)
  • information about getting published

Thursday, July 21, 2011

Review and Rating of Captain America: The Chosen



Writer: David Morrell
Artist: Mitch Breitweiser
Color Artist: Brian Reber
Letterer: Cory Petit
Publisher: Marvel
REVIEW
In Captain America: The Chosen, Marvel’s touching upon what it does best, World War Two (Who are better villains than the Nazis?). The comic, starring Corporal James Newman in Afghanistan, parallels Captain America’s struggles in the Second World War with the hardships of today’s war. And I should mention, this isn’t a story just about Captain America.  Long story short, The Chosen follows a new hero, Newman, with a dying Captain America as his guide (the hero’s “supernatural aid,” according to Joseph Campbell, if you want to go there.). Although this is Morrell’s first foray in comic book writing, he gives us a very decent script, with a solid plot and compelling characterization. I was drawn into the story enough to not question the bizarre think/mental teleportation machine Captain America was hooked up to. Without Captain America taking the lead, Morrell had to create a pretty darn convincing new hero. I’d say he succeeded. The use of flashbacks, of both Captain America and Corporal Newman, strengthen the characterization by contributing to our understanding of the character’s fears and motivations. Yes, the solider-fighting-for-his-wife-and-child bit is cliché, but at least it’s not over-emphasized.
            The art, particularly through color and sharp lines, set the tone of the comic. Sandy tans, harsh browns, an almost monochromatic artist’s pallet, and muted grays and reds reflect the mood of the dying Captain America. Check out the panel-less page of everyday heroes in chapter six. Non-existent panels give the content a feeling of limitlessness, adding to the effect (created by captions) that heroes can be anywhere (and everyone). And that’s the ‘moral’ of the comic, by the way.
            Yeah, Captain America died already, but this burp in continuity can be forgiven by the uniqueness of Captain America’s second death and the comic’s solid script and artwork.
P.S. Morell includes part of his script in the back of the book. Great reference for new comic writers!
RATING
%Panels Devoted to Women
2.11%
Women in Action
* Women don’t participate in plot-moving action
The only women in the entire comic are Newman’s wife, who appears only in panels that are flashbacks/daydreaming, silent everyday heroes in chapter six, and “extras.”
Women as Leaders
n/a
See above.
Women as Sex Objects
*** Women are depicted as sexy (or their sex is not emphasized at all), but their allure does not define their purpose as a prominent, plot-moving character in the comic.
But here’s a caveat: women aren’t plot movers. At least they aren’t objectified.
Men Deviating from Male Stereotypes
** Men sometimes deviate from the male stereotypes of a logical mind, rationality, lack of expression and empathy.
Okay, so it’s a comic about men in war. But Corporal Newman (and even Captain America at times) is surprisingly in touch with his emotions.

Here's my question as I prepare myself for the release of Marvel's Captain America movie this weekend: Will the Captain America movie be as compelling as The Chosen?

Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Let the Rating and Reviewing Begin!


Ms. Comix was started for the purpose of encouraging female comic writers, artists, and readers One way of reaching this mission is to provide handy resources and tools, collected on one  convenient blog.  The review + rating posts will hopefully 1. expose blog viewers to a variety of comics 2. warn viewers of absolutely horrendous comics 3. help viewers find a comic they’d like to read. Here’s how the ratings will work:

% Panels Devoted to Women
 A pretty straight-forward statistic; percentage of panels in the comic featuring a woman speaking or engaging in an important action.

Women in Action
*Women don’t participate in plot-moving action. 
**Women occasionally participate in plot-moving action.
***Women often participate in plot-moving action
 
Women as Leaders
*Women are followers, not leaders.
** Women depicted occasionally as leaders.
*** Women often lead the other characters.
 
Women as Sex Objects
*All or most women are overtly sexualized; their feminine features are over-emphasized and their main role in the comic is to provide eye candy for characters and readers.
**Women’s features are over-emphasized. Their sex separates them from male characters, but they do engage in plot-moving action.
***Women are depicted as sexy (or their sex is not emphasized at all), but their allure does not define their purpose as a prominent, plot-moving character  in the comic.

Men Deviating from Male Stereotypes
*Men never express their emotions; they engage is mostly physical action. They are depicted as logical and  apathetic.
**Men sometimes deviate from the male stereotypes of a logical mind, rationality, lack of expression and empathy.
*** Men deviate dramatically from the male stereotype. They express their emotions, use creativity, and think of others.

A Caveat about Ratings
These ratings are not to determine the ideal comic (Although they do seem to suggest that “the best” comic receives three stars all around and a high percentage of panels devoted to women—but that’s why I’m writing this disclaimer, right?) because it would effectively devalue any comic with a male protagonist and few female characters. The ratings are coupled with a review, which touches upon other  redeeming (or not) qualities of the comic. 

The purpose of the ratings is to simply provide a quick reference to help you choose the best comic to suit your current desires. For example, if you’re sick and tired of reading comics with booby women who have no real plot-moving purpose in the comic, avoid a comic with a one star rating for “Women  as Sex Objects.” Or if you’re looking for a comic with a strong female lead, read a comic with three stars for “Women as Leaders.” And if you just don’t want to read about men anymore, pick up a comic with a high percentage of panels devoted to women. As the reviews and ratings begin, I might (and probably will) change the rating descriptions or add new ratings accordingly. Advice and suggestions are welcome.

Coming soon…review and ratings of  Marvel’s Captain America: The Chosen